Bringin' you down

[Ellie ;}]

Name: Black King
Breed: Shire
Gender: Stallion
Age: 3
Height: 17hh
Coat Color: Black
Mane/Tail Color: Black
Eye Color: Blue
Herd Position: Lead Stallion
Herd: None
Sire: Sweet Revendge
Dam: Lilia
Personality:You ask for the discription of my persona hey? Well let me tell you somethin' I don't care who speaks to me cause if they are dumb enough they can put themselves in danger and be vitiously whipped and lashed till there backs bleed with blood and sweat. Got the idea? No, guess you are a thick skull? Hm? No doubt. Well, I am kind to mares sometimes and harsh to Stallions. I can be mean to mares that interfere or be a bitch towards me, thats when i step in and make mistakes but some mare wouldn't be foolish enough to try and leave me as i will get such a place in society that they will try me on for foals. I never give myself away as i am superstitious that the mares carry a disease that kills foals. Thats why I will stay back...

History:
You want to know my history? How it started? How it went? How I live to tell my ditty? Simple. One day as we all know, i was born in a field. A field of humans, a field where there is wood for boundreys and no way out as the things stand tall and they don't flinch. Some day my mother was captured in a terrible storm and the humans had the slightest care of her. There was a crack and the large things fell upon the ground. Soon we gallop off. As i was a yearling i galloped off another way so that i would never bump into her again. She was happy from the romours I heard as she had found my wild father, that had his freedom ever since my mother had been bred to a wild shire in an open field while hand grazing. I soon learn't the ways of hurting others and bucking and neighing to the gods. I soon found that after all my trys of being mean worked, and the kind did to. I found that I was a neutral as my mother and I were not rated until long ago when i was free as the wind. I soon began to wander and came to a catherdal and i made my way past it and went to the river and soon i found my fourtune...


Example Post:Not so tough are we. This Old land now belongs to me. It went inactive over the Past year or so and now I claimed it as my own. Many will be jealous at my winnings and I hope someone comes and fights me cause its exiting to fight. I bet they shall try but everyone shall lose when they fight me cause I am a powerful Stallion and such. I wonder how Long I shall own this Land? Maybe it will stay forever here. If I ever had a Colt I shall let him have my Land. I would have thought he would like it. Cause this Place is lovely. Anyone would want this Land. But I want it more. This Place has a huge Waterfall for me to watch my herd on. The water crashes onto rocks and flows down a stream into another Land. I hoped this would be here. A big Grass Land goes on and a big Maple Tree stands in the Middle. A nice place to raise up my Herd, Foals and other things on. Like I said, anyone would want this Land from me. But no-one will have the Coruage to fight me wance they know I cannot be beaten. All my Life I have been a trainreck and all. But now I am not. Since I have Land and nearly a Mare. She may come with me or she may not. I hope she does cause next year or next Summer I will announce my Lead and foals will be asked for. Easy as that.

Today, it was once again another Typically hot summers Day. I was tired of being hot and I hoped it would push over. You could hear the Waterfall crashing like thunder a mile off. How cool is that?! Then you could hear the water in the Stream trickling to the brook which was at the end of my Land and went into the forest. My terra was nice and big. The heat though was horrible. Sweat was already trickling down my sides and my barrel was heaving for mercy. I began to breath rapidly. It became hard to breath and I was getting bad sun stroke. Luckily the Waterfall was there. I trotted forward. I took a last step forward and went straight into the Water. I gasped with the Coldness . It seemed as though I craved this time. It seemed that I could hold it forever. But I soon became Cold. I got out of the water and grazed upon the grass. I was soaking and my body temputare was normal. Now the sun beat upon my hide as I grazed on the long grass. I stared around this Place that I now claimed as my own.

My auds flickered around upon my velvet, Mahogany Skull. I snorted shaking my banner to the other side. I looked around this place of glory and I soon found myself bored. I walked forward and lay down beside the Stream and laying my cranium down I began to Sleep. My breathing gentle and carm. Awaking I yawned and then I raised my cranium up. It was Evening and the Sun was beginning to set. I sighed. Another time well spent. Not. What was the use of being alive or even having Land if I didn't spend the time well. I sighed and got up. Some mare would be around right now? Or maybe one was coming. I would search tommorow. Someone would probberly come tonight.

[Yuki |Daku|]

Accepted You'll have to make a claiming post to be lead somewhere